- Version 1’s Strengths: The added components of the dream and the “silly” popping out from the paper.
- Version 1’s Weaknesses: The lack of colouring and cohesion, I suppose.
- Feeback? Hm, there was none.
- The difference: It’s more neat and simple; I made it seem like a time-lapse from Week 8 to Week 9 to Week 11.
- How successful? It’s not much better but it’d get higher score in my book. It communicates what I want to show so that worked out well.
